Flag

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Flag

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Story - 7:

Flag illustrates how imperfect but ambitious anime tend to be infinitely more interesting to write about than unambitious series that “succeed.” This series, in spite of arguably irredeemable flaws, is challenging and memorable. Even though the show is dull in some spots and downright tedious in others, the undeniable power of other scenes made me glad I had watched it.

Anime tends to focus on the imaginative and fantastic rather than a realistic "you are there" sense of immersion. Flag decides to try for an almost totally realistic feel, and deserves praise for even attempting to do so.

In some cases, the anime succeeds impressively at immersion. Flag takes place in the fictional failed state of Uddiyana, and the series creates a wonderfully detailed and complete culture to go with the country. Indeed, Uddiyana is perhaps the most compelling "character" of the entire series. Moments of quiet, rural life are set against the backdrop of a brutal civil war, and the result is not only interesting in an intellectual sense, but emotionally compelling as well.

There are also numerous excellent scenes that arise from when the narrator, a secondary camera-man named Akagi, reflects on the nature of journalism. These somber monologues outline not only the highs and lows of journalism, but also the invisible force that drives a journalist to find the next big story. Along with the scenes that explore the local culture of Uddiyana, they are easily the best parts of the show.

The two parts of Flag outline two corresponding themes that drive the show. Aside from the obvious message that peace is worth fighting for, Flag is about the importance of journalism in an age where modern society is becoming increasingly insulated from reality. Especially at the end, these themes are presented powerfully.

Unfortunately, Flag is not with out its faults. The anime wants to be both a mecha action show and a hyper-realistic account of civil war in a poverty stricken nation. This awkward marriage, in my mind, is perhaps the series' greatest weakness. After going to such great lengths to immerse the audience with a realistic setting and innovative visual presentation, the series basically throws suspension of disbelief out the window by including mechas, which are absurd in a real-world setting. Not only this, but the show seems absolutely convinced that the mechas are a prime selling point of the series; a majority of Flag’s running time is shows its characters maintaining, explaining and of course piloting the show’s mechas.

There are those that are going to argue that the presentation of the mecha is just as realistic as the rest of the show, and that's true to an extent. However, I'd argue that this does little to actually help the problem; no matter how "realistic," large, bipedal mecha will always be unfeasible from an engineering standpoint. The concept becomes even more ridiculous when placed in a series that is designed to be thought-provoking, because mecha do not stand up well to rational thought; why, for instance, do the mecha have 5-digit hands when they're just going to be shooting everything with a giant gun anyway? Additionally, because of the “realistic” presentation, the mecha combat tends to be slow, tedious and (dare I say it?) mechanical.

For that matter, the fight scenes aren’t the only parts that are robotic. Some parts of Flag just don’t have a lot of life to them, and seem to be there more to fill the viewer in on various plot details than to actually entertain. While these scenes are perhaps a necessary evil, I question the validity of a narrative that needs so much dry exposition just to be told.

At the end of the day, the story’s hyperrealism works well in some cases, but is monotonous in others. The result is a definite mixed bag, with some amazing highs and some correspondingly mind-numbingly boring lows.

Animation - 8.5:

Probably the most noticeable aspect of the entire work is the extremely unique visual presentation. Everything except for the ED is either a recorded video or a photograph, and the idea is that the entire series is a documentary playing on a character’s computer. Digital noise is added to every scene to feel like low-quality video, and a camera HUD is usually placed on top of the animation. At first the approach is jarring and even obtrusive, but around episode 3 I began to appreciate it. In many ways this is an anime interpretation of the Blair Witch Project, not in genre, but in the shaky, granulated camera footage that takes the "show, don't tell" rule of thumb to its logical extreme.

In some cases the requirement to have everything on video somewhat impedes the ability for the creators to tell its story. The gimmick also results in minor absurdities, such as when the two main characters meet and constantly film each other throughout every single one of their conversations.

Still, for the most part, the creators are able to construct a coherent plot around the visual restrictions, and the result works wonders at weaving a sense of realism and urgency into the entire affair.

Sound - 6.5

The melancholy, reflective monologues given by the narrator are nuanced and powerful, and a lot of credit should be given to the character’s seiyuu. However, while every voice actor is at least serviceable, none of the others are particularly impressive or memorable. Part of the problem is probably due to the fact that the narrator is the only character that talks through a direct feed; every other character is heard indirectly through the mic of a camera.

Though limited, the use of music is effective at enhancing the more emotional parts of the story. I enjoyed both the OP and the ED, and in particular thought the OP did a nice job of setting the tone of the story.

Characters - 5

After the mecha, another weakness that comes to mind is the characterization. Perhaps the only character with a true dynamic arc is the narrator, and he is not a large enough part of the series to carry the show alone. For the most part, the characters (including the protagonist) have little, if any, depth to them. The problem is compounded somewhat by the fact that we only hear what they say through a low-quality mic, which serves to distance them from the audience even further. The result is that while oftentimes I could intellectually appreciate a scene for how innovative and well-crafted it was, I often had little emotional investment in what was happening.

Overall - 7

So, is this show something I would recommend? I think it largely depends on the person, and how much they value innovation over sheer quality of execution. While Flag is ambitious and impressive in several spots, the series' weaknesses make it uneven at best. As a result, Flag may be a tough sell, especially to those that do not enjoy "realistic" mecha. Nonetheless, it's hard to discount how different Flag is from any anime that's come before it. This originality, coupled with the strength of certain scenes, made the show worthwhile as a whole.

[VivisQueen]

OMGOMGOMG!!!1!!! A vivafruit review. *fangirl squeal as if Kaname himself had walked into the building* We are not worthy!

Ahem. Now for some points. Firstly, I'm not sure I'm a fan of having a distinct 'these are the good bits/these are the bad bits' sections. You could just cut out the headings and let the paragraphs flow from one to the other normally. Generally, though, it reads like a good viva review - just minor details to aid your editing.

is challenging and intelligent <- I understand what someone means by 'challenging', but I never get what they mean by 'intelligent'. I think, by being challening, a show is being intelligent, but just 'intelligence' in its own seems to convey very little. I think I say this because it's become such an overused term that it's vacuous. I'd suggest either backing it up with something (i.e. is it the themes that are so clever/witty, the plot that's focused on showing real pain or whatever?), or using a more descriptive word. I was thinking maybe just leaving it at 'challenging', but that would cut the sentence a bit suddenly.

and Flag deserves praise for even attempting it <- Attempt what? If you look at the sentence in full, you just say that anime in general is fantastic rather than realistic, but that Flag deserves praise for attempting 'it'. You haven't established clearly what 'it' you're refering to. The fantastical or the realistic? I know you mean it attempts the 'realistic', but the sentence itself even in context is unclear.

In the following two sentences, you have repetition of 'impressively' and 'impressive'. I think you should change one to something else.

Additionally, because of the “realistic” presentation, the mecha combat tends to be slow, tedious and (dare I say it?) mechanical. <- Haha! My favourite sentence.

The end result of all this is that the story’s hyperrealism works well in some cases, but is monotonous in others. The result is a definite mixed bag <- Repetition of 'the result' at the beginning of each sentence.

and the entire idea is that the entire presentation is a documentary playing on a character's computer <- Repetition of 'entire' in this sentence.

In some cases the requirement to have everything on video like it is impeding the ability for the creators to tell its story. <- Somewhere around 'like it is' the sentence reads weird. There's definiteley a grammar problem there or a word missing or something.

The gimmick also results in some cases of slight absurdity <- Grammar. Doesn't make sense. Maybe 'In some cases the gimmick also results in slight absurdities'. Or 'The gimmick also results in some cases in slight absurdities'. Because of the two 'ins' being so close together, I prefer the first example. And if you use the word 'some' then 'absurdity' should be plural.

I'd try and rewrite the Sound section to make the sentences connect a bit better. At the moment (I'm guessing cause it's a rough draft) it reads like you're just ticking off a list of things you need to mention for Sound. Just a couple of 'On the other hand' or 'While this is this' kind of thing should fix it.

I enjoyed the review, and because I'm someone who loooooooooves innovation, I will check out Flag. Sounds exactly like the kinds of anime I've been trying to get hold of in order to expand my horizons. Thanks for the read!

[vivafruit]

Thanks. I addressed all of your points (I in particular agree with you on the overuse of "intelligent." That's definitely something that I need to watch out for), and also filled in some holes that were left. I'll let this sit for a while longer in case anyone else wants to give feedback, and then I'll give it one more read-through and post it to the site.