You're nothing if not dedicated to typing about your site - I'll give you that. Unlike with Vivian, I actually read through your paragraphs and, once again, felt compelled to type one more message.
Since I don't want to post reviews on MAL when my ratings reverse, there's no way to get feedback, I declared my last review to be my last review, and Swedish women are out to get me
, I'll make you a deal: when I'm done with NG Life, I'll type up a review, send it to my editor and see what happens. If it's liked/deemed helpful, then I'll continue typing semi-regular manga reviews for AP. If it isn't, I'll kill myself, but don't worry about that.
And, yes: I'm well aware you have no paragraph count requirement. But a review isn't a proper review in my eyes unless it's detailed, and when I like something, I type A LOT about the characters/story.
As for structure, I wasn't referring to AP's forced structuring so much as the kind required in my head so it's focused/not a mess. If I go with the forum variety of reviews and just type whatever comes into my head, there's a chance only I'll comprehend it. And so, more time/effort is required before finger meets keyboard. And more time after finishing to see if the length can be shortened.
Now, I go, for reals. Hopefully this has taught Vivian a valuable lesson about offering her body in return for AP reviewing -- it doesn't always go in the direction you want it. (All I wanted was NG Life love...)