Re: thoughts about my AMV (please)
DavidSeth, man I love your work. For a first AMV, this is ASTOUNDING. I've seen some ****.
1) The first half is brilliant with the scenes fitting excellently. My favourite would be the part where Cash sings about needles and you see the Eva being pierced through the head. That actually made my breath catch.
2) The second half is weaker. There are moments like the 'world of dirt' where young Shinji kicks the mound of sand which are lovely, or when Shinji goes for Asuka's throat, that fits well with the songs too, but they are too interspersed with scenes that are rather random.
I will tell you now, the quality of that is middle-to-high and the song is a perfect choice. You do vary the length of the scenes a little, which is also good, and the change in scenes fits the rhythm of the song. But maybe you need to work on tightening up the theme throughout. If that makes sense.
Also, do you take requests? :D
EDIT: OMG did I ever mention I got that DVD about the rats and rock'n'roll? I got that months ago but haven't yet watched it. Hmmm... I will do so before I leave.
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