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Originally Posted by vivafruit
OMG THE DRAMA.
KiraRin: I'd actually recommend cutting the first paragraph for reasons unrelated to Funkgun's mildly hilarious overreaction. Most readers aren't going to care at all about your critics, why you wrote the review to silence them, etc. They'll be reading to see what you thought of Hare + Guu, and in that context the paragraph is irrelevant and unnecessary.
Otherwise a nice review. Keep bringing on the Britishisms. ;)
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Oh, I don't mind now, she told me it was not aimed at me. I believe her. =) Maybe it is therapeutic.
I dont think I have ever overblown something before. so It is fun to do it at least once.
hang tight for Days of Our Funk.....
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Originally Posted by ThePatches
Also, Funk, you don't get to come the land of the grammar bitchez without an English lesson:
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I was wondering why that looked wrong.
