I enjoyed the review Ace, and would use the criticism as a point to build on. You'll notice edits take less and less time as you write more, but there will always be points to learn from. I don't think Patches was saying to try to be someone else, but look at the flow and style in ranty type reviews. My Eiken one isn't particularly ranty, but the Skelter Heaven one is. And the Paniponi Dash! one will be very ranty when I finally finish it >.<
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Originally Posted by ThePatches
(PLEASE don't try to be Kira, that could get ugly... then sexy... then ugly)
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Did I say you could be let off the leash??
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