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Originally Posted by charliechan
Pokemon Adventures (Pocket Monsters SPECIAL)
In a world full of weird creatures with magical powers their are many events that to be told.
These creatures are known as Pokemon and together with their human partners they travel the world both in hope of getting stronger and fulfil their dreams.
These stories are based on plots from the virtual games such as trainers like Red in Kanto who dream is to be as strong as he can be.
Gold in Johto who needs to find all of his family’s pokemon that he lost, and there are many more, even seeing the story for the villains side. And with more detail into how Pokemon like Mewtwo and Deoxys came to be.
Tags: Monsters, Tournaments
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hi charlie, this is a great start! the only thing that needs to be changed is you have a lot of 'personal opinion' type statements in there... specifically, 'these stories are based on' or 'more detail into'. basically a synopsis should describe the story, but not in a third person type sense... it should just describe the events like a movie announcer would.
so you could just put a swing on this like 'from following trainers such as Red who dreams to be the strongest trainer, to Gold who needs to find all of his family's lost Pokemon, to discovering the reasons behind Deoxys and Mewtwo's creations, there's many adventures to be had in the world of [is there a world name?]
let me know if how i described the last part is accurate - if so, ill edit the first part and use it :)
