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Reviews can be fun to write, and it's good that you're taking the opportunity to start. Your scores for sound and characters aren't far off what I'd rate them either. However, I'd recommend for future reviews, within each of the categories you think about what kind of criteria must be satisfied to achieve each score from 1-10; in that manner, you can be fairly systematic in your scoring.

I'd also recommend that you provide more content for each of your categories. In the character section, for example, you can talk about the characters you thought were appealing and those that were not, and why they had the particular effect on you that they did. There are a lot of good experienced review writers on this site, so I'd recommend checking out some of the reviews listed in the anime database to get an idea of what other people do, then you can go on to develop your own style. Anyway best of luck!